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Surrender

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It’s a part of what helps us let go
It’s not only psychological
It helps you walk
It lets in air
It can surprise you
But it’s everywhere

It’s a riddle in your step
A head turn on the street
Pings of light
In all our eyes
It’s worth the time to meet

Its hands are valor
Its tongue is grace
There lives the wish
Within its face

There are no deadlines
No appointments to make
Just a quick turn down your essence
And you’ll know what it is to shake

To shake the world
Outside your own
To grab and grip it
Then let it go

Then let it go

Let-
go.
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austheke's avatar
good! i like the concept. but again, rhyme is forced in second and fourth stanzas. the rest is alright. word choice is quite good, again.

so all in all, i like it.