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Be Vulnerable

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I laugh because I’m out there
I thrive because I’m exposed
People don’t get
We’re meant to be vulnerable
Step over veracity
And scribble a scream
You’re the last falcon
And that’s everything

You don’t have wings
Better, a smile
And it makes them soar
You can deepen their love
And open their ears
They’re swimming before you
Gulping their fetes

Glide, glide
Little forgotten
Most unexplainable
Fortunate oracle
No barrier, no warning
You’re a painter’s face
Never recognized
In the art he creates

And now you are taking
A sip from a dream
You feel that your limbs
Are finally breathing
There are humanly pleasures
They stretch down below
But they see you soaring
And urgently follow
Try it. You never know what might love you.
© 2007 - 2024 Valethia
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Day-Dreamer07's avatar
This is awesome.

Not only your messages, but your images.
Your last stanza made me smile.:)


the only, only thing I might suggest, is to throw in some more punctuation, because it would be easier to find your flow that way. But totally not a big deal, I still adore this. :clap: